Attempt number 2

After putting on my new kimono, of course I had to ask for feedback from other kimono-lovers. Was my kitsuke good, or what are things that could improve....?
They gave me some tips and tricks, and the result you can see in the pictures .

Just to be sure, 'cause people who don't know a thing about kimono might will think that there's no difference in these pictures and the ones I posted earlier..., the obi musubi, or obi knot, is better, the green scarf (obiage) on top of the obi is more visile and the collar is better.

But still there's much to learn...